Cause All of The Stars Fade Away

She knew what she wanted,she told what she had

She laid herself out for anyone to take

It was all she wanted

To feel

To breathe

To need

She thought he could give her the world but he didn't even wait

He couldn't handle the hopeless case

The girl who couldn't keep her eyes from space

She had gone crazy with no moments to breathe.

 

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