candle wax

in the crimson and gold, 

you burn the brightest,

the stories you've told,

left me ignited.


the flame flickers and cracks,

don't leave at dawn.

i light the candle wax,

but you're still gone.


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hi, i already commented on one of your poems but I just want to reiterate you are so good. Your storytelling, vocabulary and imagery are breathtaking.


im sorry for responding so late!!! pls you are so sweet n considerate???? this made my entire year??? you're so magical thank you for this???? <3

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