Broken love

Love is but an empty field,

a bitter sweet emotion.

A one-sided feel is something to yield,

because it’s a dead-end notion.

 

Don’t let love lead you blind,

it’s never worth the pain.

Just follow your mind,

before heart takes over again.

 

You deserve so much more,

love is just a worthless trial.

Quickly shut the door,

and don’t open it for awhile.

This poem is about: 
My community
Our world

Comments

emmastones

Ouch! your poem refelcts a story of a heart break. I may not approve that mind can suvey away the pain as i am a content writer at

erosenfeld21

is there something I need to work on? i couldnt tell if this comment was a critique or not. 

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