Brand New

I've been still for so long

I forgot i could walk.

Stuck in the same place, 

Same mindeset;

Haven't reached my goals yet.

 

Looking ahead

There's so much to do;

So much to see. 

A new person to be.

The cage door is open;

Inviting me to be free. 

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

Wired6

Your use of short and succinct sentences is impactful. 

Great,MissTess. X

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