Blinded success

Some see the success 

 never the stress 

always the hugs and cheers

 never the blood and tears

they know of your glory

but not of your story 

some will envy your victory

as if you never witnessed misery

others will rejoice at the shortcomings

not knowing that Gods blessings are still coming 

but even when its received  

its undeserving in their eyes 

but still there should be no need to wear a disguise

Be great and be bold

And success will unfold

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