Blind love

Tue, 11/07/2017 - 21:58 -- Raisa99

Fighting and Complaining

Our time has perished away.

What started out as our only home,

Transformed into the casket for the love we mourned.

Hurt and Torn

From where we began

Our painful song slowly rang 

How do we fall out of the love we longed?

From snowing sky to raining fall

The poison seeped through our wall

Now as I lay on the bed

Memories flashing in my head

I wished to forgive the man I loved

With whom I shared all my flaws

For whom I stayed up all those nights

Sharing tears and laughters alike

Because I loved him,

I tried my best

To see the love beyond the test.

Because I loved him,

I was blind 

To his self-centered way of mind.

The simple path had turned bitter and course

Since the day we closed all our doors

Today we are left with the love we fear

Building walls anywhere near...

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