BLIND

It’s A Lot Easier To Believe The Warming Feeling Of Love For Another Is Thoroughly Reciprocated Than To Admit The Blatant Truth That Your Love Is One Sided. The Indifference Of Your Partner To Show The Synonymous Level Of Affection To That Of Yours Does Not Insinuate That They Are Selfish. On The Contrary It Just Highlights One Incompetence To Synchronize The Zealous Feeling Of Overwhelming Love. Albeit Love Cannot Be Forced Nor Feigned Sooner Or Later The Realization Will Hit You Bringing You Back To Reality That It Lacks Genuity . The Intimacy That Adorns Love Is Fickle Unpredictable Bounding Hearts Together For However Long It Desires. When It Unravels It Reigns You In Succumbing You To Vulnerability That Makes You Orchestrate The Anguish That Instantaneously Follows, It Restrain You From Conscious Judgment Barring Your From Making Sound Decisions. A Wail Resonates Within The Mind  Bounding You For Sometime. Her Silhouette Swallows Your Mind, The Hollow Of His Jaw Obscure Your Sight. Time Seems To Slow As Their Laugh Embrace The Atmosphere. Drowned By The Feeling Of Liberation You Anticipate Its Presence. Paralyzingly It Holds You Hostage To The Fleeting Thrill Until You Are Left Asphyxiating On Your Own Solitude.

 

This poem is about: 
Me
My family
My community
My country
Our world

Comments

Vera M.K.

Wow... I felt so identificated by this poem. It is so well written, all the words are giving me a lot of meaning. I haven't seen much of this poetic structure around here, but I love it.

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