as black as the raven.

“ i think hair as black as the raven! is quite cliche. i never really understood why someone would compare a the beauty of one’s hair to such a murder. this was until i met you. your hair , gold flecks in the sunlight , i swear you are prettier than any bird that great ! and when i hold you , i can still smell parts of shampoo and MY GOD!  this is what i have been asking for ! i thank all the heavens each and every night for sending down one of their perfect cherubs to me, for i am ethereal when i am with you .  ♡ “

Comments

coolidris

That's a nice poem you wrote about a cherub that you really like.

avery.riane

thank you ! ♡

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