Black Angel, Broken Wing

Location

17059
United States
40° 36' 34.8084" N, 77° 24' 4.824" W

Demons
Circling, closing in
Darkness all around
The hero stands alone and silent
Holy sword held high
Aspiring greatness
Reaching, slashing
Evil laughter
Enemy rising
Father of demons
Red eyes, glaring
Hero slashing, falling, failing
Demons flock, devour
Hero has fallen
Great enemy laughs
Then, angels
Swooping, fighting
Avenging
The enemy roars, rises
He swipes, he burns
Angels fall
Black angel, broken wing
Takes up sword
Enemy turns
Too late
Black angel, broken wing
Broken, battered, bruised, bleeding
Blade drives home
Enemy heart stops
Falling, falling
Dead, victory
But wait
Black angel falls
Sword drops
Dead

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