A Better Man

Tue, 11/04/2014 - 01:58 -- Borrego

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Woman That I love and will always love 
You, the reason that this verse is alive 
Love, you are as majestic as a dove 
You beaten, with such beauty, the bad vibe 

You, having to be father and mother 
My brother and I will remain in debt  
You always managed to take us further 
With your dedicated hard work and sweat 

Tears me up when I look back at the past 
When it got heavy you carried the weight  
We are a team that was built to outlast  
You, our captain, a hero with short height

 

You see me, love me, just the way I am

Thanks to you mom I am a better man  

 

 

Comments

katelynmarie

Beautiful!

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