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Luis Vargas
Black hole by: Luis V
There’s a black hole right in front of me
I admire it
I stare at it
I wanna get close to it
I get close to it
I get sucked into it
I see a whole different me while in the black hole
I see me happy
I see me loving god
I see me being a supporter
But I ask myself if that’s me
Than why am I not like that now
The other me says
Because you are still going through heartbreak
But I promise you
You will get through it
You will forget about it
You will be happy again
You will not have to worry about demons coming after you again
Because you will be protected by god like you want
You know god does love you
You might not feel like he does
You might feel like he’s abandoned you
But he hasn’t
Your just busy focusing on yourself
That you forgot about Him
And I completely understand
Because I’m you
But you will get out of this whole
You will get out of this hell
And you will feel happiness again
You’ve been through hell and back for the people you love
Some appreciate it and go through hell and back with you
Others just don’t care and will backstab you
Like they did in the past
And those friends you have to let go of them
Because they are nothing but burdens on your shoulders
And I don’t seeing you like this
Carrying burdens that are not yours
But you will get through this
You will be happy again
Just trust me
I know you have trust issues
But you have to trust me on this
I know you dont like dad right now
But in the future you relationship with him will be restored
You will want to hangout with him
You will want to talk to him
You will love him
Even though you love him now
But you will love him even more
You will be happy
I step out the black hole
Feeling a wind of peace over me
And I smile
Then I see my angel
And he’s like
How was that experience?
You see trust that version of you and God
You will be happy again
Your relationship with God and your father
Will be restored and you will be happy like a little child
I hug my angel and I tell him promise me please
He tells me I promise and he kisses me on my head
And pats my head and tells me everything will be ok
And it will be in the hand of God
Just trust
new poem it's been hard for me to come up with one recently through out spring break but I finally came up with one today
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
peace and blessings Luis
hope all is well
you are a powerful voice to the community......did you ask your church about a forum addressing bullying, along with an open mic/talent show?
you have alot to offer young brother
this is a powerful poem
Luis Vargas
I was supposed to read my poem out loud on Friday last week about bullying for a youth service but then I couldn't go because I had a cold the whole spring break and it went away on Sunday
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
that's unfortunate you were sick, but praise God that you're better
don't let this opportunity pass by, speak to your pastor about performing for the youth service
i'll be going live tomorrow evening @ 6:30pm
Luis Vargas
Yeah, the youth service already passed but I will try to do the next one and I will try my best to go on the live because I need to focus on school because I have 38 or 39 days left until I graduate high school
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
school is top priority
graduate young brother, and go on the next stage in your young life
Luis Vargas
Yup, I already applied to Valencia community College on Saturday so after summer time I will be able to go there
Luis Vargas
Thank you by: Luis V
Thank you for everybody in the front line
Thank you for those who are serving our country
Thank you for fighting for our country
Thank you for fighting for our freedom
Thank you for everything you guys have done
Thank you for sacrificing your lives
When you don’t have too
Thank you God for giving us these wonderful heroes
Not every superheroes wear capes
These superheroes we have today wear
Scrubs, uniforms, bunker gear, masks, etc.
But we have to remember the best superhero we had
Was wearing a crown of thorns and was crucified
With nails on his palms and his feet
That superhero was Jesus Christ
And he’s the reason why America is the way it is today
Free, we have other heroes
Jesus died for our sins
So thank you Jesus
We are the land of Free and home of the Braves
But I really think we should be thankful for that
Bc we have freedom of speech, we have protection
In other countries you cannot say whatever you want
And depending on what you say you’ll get stoned to death
So please stop taking advantage of this
Stop ruining our country
Bc if jesus was alive today you guys would disown him
Like he was never part of history
Jesus created history
Jesus is the reason why we are alive today
Without him sacrificing himself to be crucified
I’m pretty sure we would all burn in hell
Jesus could’ve easily said nah bro, I dont have to do this for you gusy
He could’ve called an army of angels and tell them to take him back to heaven
He didn’t have to sacrifice in himself
He didn’t have to get crucified
He didn’t have to be whipped
He didn’t have to have his flesh taken off of his body
He didn’t have to wear that crown of thorns
So jesus is our real superhero and Thank you Jesus
new poem
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
Amen..............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
well said good brother.........well done
Jesus is our true superhero
you are a superhero too brother, you stand out and be different from others
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
that's a great move, continue to enhance your education
Luis Vargas
Thank you, this is a poem I plan on sharing with my youth leader to see what he thinks of it when I got to church on Wendsday if I do bc my mom is still sick she has cough attacks when she laughs or when she doesn't have her water
Luis Vargas
Fight by: Luis V
Fight for you life
Fight for yourself
Fight your soul
Don’t let the devil take it
Don’t let the devil take over you
You gotta fight
Fight like you’ve never done before
Join forces with the Father
Through prayer, reading the bible, and fasting
I know my life has been a roller coaster
Still is a roller coaster
I know me myself need to join forces with the father
But my life wouldn’t be what it is today
Without the father
I wouldn’t be the Luis I am today without the father
The devil has thrown everything he has at me
There were times I was happy
Other times I was depressed
Other times I was suicidal
Other times I felt anxiety
But I overcame every single one of those emotions
With the help of the father
I healed my broken heart with the fathers healing hands
I know I sitll need to give him a chance
Because I don’t want to run away from his arms anymore
I’ve shoved God to the sidelines
And yet he still waits for me patiently with his arms wide open
And I really don’t know why
All I know is that he is a good father and he loves
Every single one of his children equally
The father has no favorites.
Fight for you life
Fight, fight, fight
Do not run
Stand your ground and fight
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
Exodus 14:14-be still and let God fight your battle
read that verse
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
be a blessing
let your voice be heard and encouraged
Luis Vargas
Hey I got accepted into Valencia that's the college I applied to they sent me an email today
MVP-Most Valuable Poet
Congratulations young brother
God will continue to open up doors for you
continue to be an inspiration to others that come your way
There will be challenges, but persevere through it all
when you get a chance, watch my YouTube video last night
Luis Vargas
Our world needs to change by: Luis V
Our world needs to change
Youth killing youth
Youth robbing senior citizens
Senior citizens ask them to spare them
But the youths decides not to and shoot them
We got police officers killing blacks and oriental people
I swear if the hispanics are next I’m gonna have to start protesting
I’m sick and tired of these killings
I’m Puerto Rican and I’m not ashamed
So if the police kills the hispanics
They are going to open hell from the hispanic community
Our world needs to change
Jesus is coming soon
Youth’s think about your future
I myself am a youth
I’m 17 years old and I turn 18 on July 31st
I graduated high school may 20th
I start college in August
So youth think about your guy’s future
Some of you are parents
Others are uncles, brothers, sisters
Our world needs to change
BLACK LIVES MATTER
ASIAN LIVES MATTERS
ALL LIVES MATTERS
And I’m not ashamed to say any of this
Get you guys act up together
Jesus is coming
And this is no time to be playing around
The devil is not wasting anytime
Collecting as many souls as he can
I know I have to get back my soul back from him
I can’t continue living life the way I am
Worldly music, cursing everyday
I live in sin and I know it
I’m a hostage to sin
And in the name of Jesus Christ
With his help I can escape this lifestyle
This is very unusual of me to write poems like this
Because my poems have lots of cursing usually
But I figured out that it’s God changing my heart
But Our world needs to change
Youth stop the killing, stop the robbing, etc
Some of you guys are parents
Think about your kids
You wanna watch them grow up
You don’t want them to go into the lifestyle you are in now
Jesus is coming soon and I feel it
No times to play with him or the devil
The minute you play with the devil
Your playing with fire
OUR WORLD NEEDS TO CHANGE!!
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MVP-Most Valuable Poet
May I ask you Luis -would you be a guest on my show?
you are very insightfully thoughtful in what Jesus is showing you
you have amazing ability to impact lives of young people
would you be a guest on my show?
Luis Vargas
Morning, sorry for responding late I would love to be on your show I just have to talk to my mom about it first and when will it be?
Luis Vargas
Satan by: Luis V
Satan is not wasting any time
Gathering as many souls as he can
He knows his time is short
So he is not wasting anytime
He gathered a soul recently
The soul of Lil Nas X
With the song” Montero”
For all you guys that don’t know
Lil Nas X his real name is Montero Lamar Hill
Freaking giving Satan a lap dance
Snaps satans neck
And puts satan’s horns on himself
Saying that he is a god
Lil Nas X
You are no god
You are just a lost soul
Crying for help
Your in Satan’s playground now
And he will win everytime if you don’t accept Jesus
Satan is not wasting any time
Lil nas x your shoes are over stupidly expensive
Containing 1 drop of human blood
On top of that you call the shoes the 666 shoes
666 is the devil’s number
Revelation 13:18 says
“Here is wisdom. Let him that hath understanding count the number of the beast: for it is the number of a man; and his number is six hundred threescore and six.”
Satan is not wasting anytime
Protect your soul
Protect your life
I live in sin and I admit
But I’m working on it
I’m working with the one who loves me
I’m praying
I’m still not reading my bible
But I plan on getting there
But I am praying again it may not be everyday
But it is once every 2 days
And that’s more than how I used to pray
I would stop praying
And pray every 3 months
Satan is not wasting anytime
He going to come at you with everything he got
But you have to remember Jesus is so much stronger than satan
Satan can’t control you
I know I felt like that for years
Because I was in hands of Satan for 7 years since 6th grade
But I’m trying to get out of his grips
I’ve come to realize that I can’t keep fighting and fighting
Without Jesus because it’s useless
Satan is way stronger than I am
I thought I could do this by myself
But I can’t
Jesus I need you
To fight the father of lies
I need you to take my soul back
I can’t keep living like this
I never sold my soul
But the way I am living
It feels like it
And God I need you
SATAN IS NOT WASTING ANYTIME
TURN TO JESUS HE LOVES YOU
WAITING FOR YOU WITH HIS ARM WIDE OPEN
SATAN IS NOT WAISING ANYTIME
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