Being

Fri, 05/24/2013 - 21:18 -- navasa

Location

33578
United States
27° 51' 30.8736" N, 82° 20' 23.1504" W

A cave obscures unknown paths;
A tiny torch casts beauty on barren walls;
Futile flames fight undying darkness
Seeking a straightforward course.

Bones of past travelers lie
Waiting, waiting for the clearest road
Stagnant circumstances die,
Bones of past travelers lie;

But now a small light reveals a larger shadow:
Where to go, what to do, why to be;

Decide.

Comments

Colorandwhim

This is a good poem

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