Behind the one who doesn't care

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748 Grandmont st
United States
32° 15' 22.9752" N, 90° 8' 6.9828" W

I promised not to show weakness
I promised not to let them in
I promised not to tell my secrets
I promised not to care
I broke that promise because of you, in that moment I fell for you
I broke that promise when I began to hear what they had to say
Since I broke that promise I showed them my true ways
I care
I love
I want you here
There is so much more to the person who claims she doesn't care

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