I really love the images that this inspires, I especially like the first line. I do feel that the lines are not as connected as they could be however, the first one relates very well to your title "BEES" and the second line relates well to the first, but I'm not certain the final line fits the poem very well, I think the context you were trying to set up in the earlier lines is slightly lacking. 

I absolutely love the general feeling of the poem though, a pleasure to read. 

Stage: Feels like this one is about bees. Tone: Peaceful

Language & Lit. Devices: First line is really great! You can feel bees flying around! Only thing that stood out as changeable is line 2.It's not really clear what you're trying to getting across. Though that's probably just me. Maybe try reading over it a bit more?

Structure & Layout: I don't have any personal problems with your structure or layout.

Nice poem!