To Be More Humble

The sparkling sunlight

Oh how it does swoon

For the path of the warm summer's rains

Knowing the sun

Only has til but dusk

Yet still, so humbly, it wanes

 

Give up the spotlight

Give up your crown

And everlasting, soon shall ye find

Your dawn comes again

And your hefty reward

That you shall gain so much more peace of mind

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