Be Blessed

Mold me
Make me
Give me life
Supply me
With your love
Bring me to my knees
Bowing in your prescence
I have given up
Im holding on
To your grace
Dont lose me
Dont leave me
Carry me
Until the rapture

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

upnorthdavid

5 years ago

I love the length of each line...your word choices are concise, and deepen meaning by stripping away superfluous words. Great job!

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