Awakened

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Her crystalized eyes fill with a temptuous lust

Mine shadow with doubt; 

Not a feeling to trust

She promises joy

One I've not truly felt

At least not in a while,

Since she's made it all melt

It pours out around me 

And I'm finally free

No doubt, no guilt, yet I still thirst for she

Only a kiss can quench my yearn

But would burn upon my lips

And even sir Devil himself could see no good in this

I stand brave and tall

Wait for my goddess' touch

Close my fiery eyes

Oh, this is all too much!

No patience remains

I begin to shake

With one hand in my hair

My body awakes

She holds on real tight

Afraid to let go

No one else can see this

But deep down I'll know. 

 

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