attainable perfection

"Perfection is only attainable through hard work"
Said a guy I knew who had a few screws loose.
"If attained others will go berserk!"
Said the same guy as he was listening to blues.
The word always crosses my mind
But to what it is I seem really blind.
Most people go through life arrogantly thinking
"If I was perfect I know my life wouldn't be sinking."
What a fool are they, to think they can be perfection
For perfection is only attainable at gods discretion.
So I call to those arrogant fools
Who think they are merely tools.
Strive to achieve
And you will believe
That people concieve
To not be decieved.

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