asking for

Iḿ not asking for a whole lot,

maybe I am or maybe i´m not,

What iḿ really asking for,

is for you to keep open the door,

 

you see me as someone who cannot acomplish greatness,

you slam down any opprotunity,

So I fail before I try,

 

your thoughts on me could fill up chapter books,

do you know what it was like to have dreams,

does it matter the looks,

stop shooting the laser beams

 

despite what you make think,

I shall succeed,

What iḿ asking for,

is just for you to simply understand

 

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Hi Supermlm,hope ur well?

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