Angela

Wed, 05/29/2013 - 02:04 -- asuazo

Location

79924
United States
31° 53' 47.2956" N, 106° 25' 43.7124" W

You can close your heart from the one that loves you with your lies.
You don't notice what I can't verbalize.
I tell you through my eyes the way I looked at you before,
Our faces were close but my words were kept away.
This feeling I had, you see, I could not express to thee.
Like Romeo and Juliet I played Russian roulette but I was the one shot down.
My words they twisted and turned but I got burned.
It was you to blame.
These words are so lame,
I'm just going to stop, you were my weakness,
My law I always broke.
Now I'm done, just shun me from your heart.
I'll get over this one day and this is my start.

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asuazo

this poem is near and dear to my heart just like the person I wrote about.

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