alone in the night

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all alone in the night

the stars make it bright

and bring back my sight

when i'm alone in the night

a moment to reflect on what i've done right

any wrongdoings, i ask for forgiveness so i know that things will be alright

another day where i was save from a fight

i pray to my savior with all my might

and ask to protect me as i laid to rest, alone in the night

 

   

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j.katie40

How is it that you are so willing to comment on the beauty of other's piece's, but none return the favor?

 

This is a beautiful piece, written with truth and innocence, by a beautiful person so commited to this community. 

 

thank you.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

thank you for your kind words

i felt the words you said to me

i've gotten responses from other poems i wrote

it's about connecting and impacting  lives

i know i'm an influence to people

 

im very humble that you compliment by beauty, as a person and a poet

check out my other poems

thank you for luv and support

 

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you said something that is essential

it's about being a community where we can share our experiences and learn from one another

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