What were you thinking?

Letting her feel so alone

she was crying, hurting and breaking

Bones were what the mirror shown

All she wanted was someone to care

For someone to finally be there

Desperation is something she always bear

Why can't the world be fair?

Now, Blood was dripping

and her body on the bed

Finally free from her suffering

Lying cold and dead

Today, there are more people out there

Having feelings that they need to share

Doing things you wouldn't even dare

So let's unite and be aware...


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