You breathe me in and out

So you think you are alive?                             

Asks air

Warming up in my rays

And lazing around

Calling it living 

Sun says, not fair.

Birds, bees, butterflies 

Hovering around

Ask are you alive?

To say yes, I don’t dare.

Humming they all say

Be active and alert 

Feel love for every creature

 Just get up and prepare

Now I really feel alive 

And thankful to everyone

I’m nothing without you all

I solemnly declare 

~ Indira



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