Abandoned

Sat, 05/10/2014 - 17:11 -- kdewey

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47141
United States
38° 32' 19.6008" N, 85° 35' 31.4844" W
47141
United States
38° 32' 19.6008" N, 85° 35' 31.4844" W

He made her feel like an abandoned house with broken windows and doors

There were a lot of broken boards that never got fixed

She had weeds growing in her heart but to her surprise he made her feel as if she didn't  matter

She was a nobody to him

She didn't feel safe; just hurt

Her word never mattered

Now she's like an abandoned house lost in a world unknown

Now who is going to save her and repair all of the damage he has done to her?

Surrounded by him and negativity each and everyday she's getting crushed

Wanting him back and don't know what to say or do

Scared of what he'll do and say or hopefully he won't take it the wrong way

Still that abandoned house is surrounded by still water crying to herself day and night

Now that you know some details, answer this question-

Who will save the abandoned house?

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