6 Lines of Thought: 4

It was just another dance but right away i noticed you

You stuck out like a beautiful red rose in a field full of blue

I remember when you first caught my eye, my heart stopped for a while

And i cant even explain what happened when you gave me that smile

I had always prayed to God you would someday give me a chance

And then i got it, cause you asked me to dance 

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