3 minutes without oxygen

too deep underwater to

wonder if I can get to the surface


3 hours without shelter

tooth chatteringly cold and I

want to go home


3 days without water

took a trip on the ocean in my head



3 weeks without food

to the chopping my stomach has



3 months without company

tune is rather

wondrously lonely now


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