3 Reasons Why I Love Her

Fri, 04/12/2013 - 22:21 -- Nakhil

1. In my wildest dreams you always play the hero. In my darkest hour of the night you rescue me, you save my life.
2. Sometimes your nearness takes my breath away and all the things I want to say can find no voice. Then in silence I can only hope my eyes will speak my heart.
3. If I could reach up and hold a star for everytime you made me smile, I would have the whole night sky in the palms of my hands.

Comments

Cynthia

Have you ever watched Sarah Kay's spoken word video on TED? She talks a lot about making lists like you just did in order to write poetry. She has a lot of neat ideas and your poem reminded me of them! My favorite reason in your poem is reason #3, it's really sweet. Check out Sarah Kay here:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0snNB1yS3IE  It might give you more ideas for poetry! 

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