2:00 I was out

Location

CSU
United States

I wrote this at 12:25
I feel my eye,
dry
Sleepy an sleep deprive
From staying up until about 3 maybe 5
I've , come accustom to this college live style
An it feels like I'll zzzzzzzzzzzzz
Zzzzzz Zzzzzz

Sorry did I do doze off for awhile
Damn now it's 12:40
An ether i structurally
an systematic
put this together
Or I keep falling asleep like whatever
Sheeeezzz it's already 12:50
Up like I don't have to be
up early
An surely
I'll Wake up obscurely an purely
Tried
An instead of burning desire
With Hazel colored fire
I'll just fill as if my mind is barbed wire
What was the subject again
An it's already 1:10
oh yeah yeah why do I get up when
Life as me in a headlock
An at the same time,time wants to box
Struggle come along an with a sack of socks
An faith as a bag of rocks zzzzzzzzzzz

Sorry I stop
But that's a good question Why do I hop
out of bed
I could've stayed dead
Till aches hurt my head
An my stomach is begging for a piece of bread
Is that y I hop out of bed
To get lectured by a professor who doesn't speak English
And can't distinguish he's y's and s
An no matter the question it's always (yes)
Think I got a C or a B
An it's already 1:40
I think it's almost time for me to say night
Wait but, I still haven't answered the question just right
I'm not going to say something like (every day is a fight)
Or( to become better an bright ) zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
The reason I get up when daylight is bright
Is the same reason I'm going to sleep late at night
It's just apart of life

An if you wondering it's 1:53 at night zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzZzzzzzZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

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