reality

Sat, 10/25/2014 - 15:46 -- Soulae

Watching a movie,
It looks so real,
Like my life,
How the actors make decisions,
Get hurt,
suck in the pain with their stomachs,
Are happy,
put on the best joy that you want to clone it,
Romances so magnetic, 
chemistry you wish you could have with someone,
Inherit from scenes,
Watch it over and over maybe it’ll happen,
I’m still watching it, it feels so real,
I can relate like a relationship,
The bloodline is connected,
It’s family,
I know these storylines,
Dang… it ended,
It’s over man,
Only 3 hours… 
what kind of reality is this?
Well that’s my fault for trying to base my reality on a chip tooth,
Broken into a clip, 
a glimpse of what reality is,
It’s only a movie girl,
Chill,
That stuff ain’t real,
Try acting how they act and you’ll be considered fake,
You only saw one side of life,
TV is not dimensional, so don’t try to copy it,
Draw your own reality.

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

well said

TV is not dimensional, so don’t try to copy it,
Draw your own reality.

these last two lines is powerful

follow your own path and define what makes you happy

dope piece overall

Soulae

Thanks MVP. Appreciate the comment .

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