Relief

Location

10453
United States
40° 51' 5.7132" N, 73° 54' 55.4652" W

I Love him dearly
I Swear i Do
but it was bout that time
that i'll get sick
of you

Yea I Moved on
So did you
But less than a week..NOW
that's despicable

So I opened the book & read
another chapter.
I swore now i would be more happy,forever and after

Insecurities hunts me like the boogie man
But "Mister Mensah" stated HE's my biggest fan. WAIT
you would think that'll statisfy me
But flames of wonder spirits still stands behind me.
It seems to ruin stuff that seems so crystal clear.

But i guess thats what happens when you've been cursed through the years.
YES i am a difficult person, Can't deny that.
Critical w/ Facts to justify that
So where you and me stand wasn't the end

But it isn't okay cause i thought you was my bestest friend!
HAHA head so big you thought you was what propaganda call it "Swavey"
Now Jeffrey took your spot cause HE knows how to treat a lady.

We past over due i was sick of you. You was tired of me and it was OBVIOUSLY seemed
If you was tired for this long
why you hold me back thats how i know you wrong !
No this is not an hatred letter its just something to write to finally let "chu" go and guess what

I feel better !

No More to say
You wasn't the
Nigga to stay
Its Okay Because
its on to the next one
Anyway

WHAT ahhh relief

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Comments

jwiener

Relationships are complicated, and this poem does a great job of describing how relationships build and fall apart, and how that is not always negative, because new ones will always be built again. This is a great poem, and although very personal, very relatable as well.

Margaret.K.Brown

Thanks guys !

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