Blind and Lifeless

Tediously, we tap our thumbs on tired tables

Bearing our weight consistently… dreadfully

Lectures echo off the walls verbatim from a projector

Effortless and relentlessly boring

No burst of thrilling statistics

No explosions of interesting stories

There’s no connection of life to learning

Every vague word weighs upon our backs

on our shoulders

on our brains

Our heads drooping lower with every sentence

Lecture after lecture

Minute after aching minute

Nothing stays in my head

But all of it goes!

Why doesn’t anything stick?!

Every gruesome graph slithers out

Every monotonous moment tires me

While

Every terrifying table of facts on the screen screams

“Are you learning anything yet?!”

Where is the color in this room?

Where are the projects and essays and group discussions?

Where is the splash of life in this everlasting sea of words and words and words?

Why must there be tedious tired tapping of thumbs and desk legs aching for release?

Our hands are tied and the knife to slice the rope lies in the unforgiving hands of our teacher

who insists upon keeping class dry and utterly tasteless.

Sans learning.

Sans knowledge.

We are hungry for the thrill of wisdom.

Comments

reedlee

this is not what i posted at all.

dancearoundconstellations

Because this isn't your poem. This is mine (:

dancearoundconstellations

Okay, sorry. I see the problem. You might want to contact someone about that. When I clicked on your poem, it redirects to mine. Or I could talk to them (: sorry about the issue

reedlee

Ya I was reallly confused :) Would you please do that because I have no idea how to contact them. I would be happy to but I just started on this yesterday and really do not understand the site that well yet.

marysitz

This is Mary from PP's staff - the problem should be taken care of! Please email me if you have any other questions: mary@powerpoetry.org

reedlee

It is very good by the way... The poem that you posted, But a I don't wanna take credit for your work in anyway, and I kinda want people to see my own /:

dancearoundconstellations

I hope you saw that we got it fixed!

By the way, thank you to the tech that adjusted this issue! (: You are wonderfully helpful!

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