Who am I


Who am i

 

the one who wake up in the morning 

 

circumstance on my mind, i'll be happy all day

 

look up through the window

 

and smile all day.

 

share my feeling by the cold air blowing in my eyes

 

Who am i, i am the mind-draw of my life

 

better vision in my eyes become realistic in my life

 

i am the chord from a guitar

 

inspiring my feeling with the warm air from the room

 

speaking it out loud as the sound from the chord

 

feeling amazed, thunderstruck, and incrediblefor my life

 

I'm ready to fight the fear and gain prosperity.

 

just as a video game when I lose I try try and try till i succeed in life

 

i never give up but i keep dreaming on.

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