The way I feel

Thu, 10/16/2014 - 02:29 -- Hez15dj

You ever feel the loss

someones presence so strong

yet it's a wasted cause

the way, I feel

like peeling the layers of your heart away 

when you don't feel like wiping the tears away 

when your most vulnerable to sway

the way, I feel when loosing someone you love

you would never have known how much I cared 

the loss 

was way more than the costs

you think you paid the price, so you say 

but today

my day 

was over when I lost you 

I feel lost

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