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He seems like such a nice guy.
that's what everyone said
their words of disbelief
echo in my head
how can they know
what happens in a home?
How can they know the pain
of what they don't see?

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jwiener

This is a great example of how smaller poems can sometimes pack a bigger punch than longer ones, because you tell such a deep story in just a few words. If you are interested in writing more poems like this, look for some inspiration for writing poems like haikus and odes under "poetry writing tips" in the "resources" section!

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