Thoughts 2

Proverbs 1:23 

23 If only you will respond to my rebuke,
then I will pour out my thoughts to you
and I will make my words known to you.

 

Thoughts 2

 

Thoughts are disappearing … floating in thin air

No way to catch them … I am too far from them

In my own seclusion … distributed everywhere

Maybe I’m the floater deep in the atmosphere

 

Maybe I am in my thought influencing the direction

Either for the positive or the opposite in power

Maybe there’s found the simple resurrection

Of blessings to others supplies in many showers

 

From my own heart thoughts are always flowing

Here is the reality of what state I am in

Seldom to depart from to where I am going

A prize or a fatality to God or self within

 

Jan Wienen

 

This poem is about: 
Me

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