But Then You Left

Mon, 07/29/2013 - 14:06 -- Brehlie

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I believed that we were
So in love
Because you made me feel so sure

BUT

You started slipping away
and I
couldn’t do anything
But cry.

THEN
YOU
LEFT

What had happened?
I thought we
Would never end.

All alone,
I couldn’t breathe.
because
I wasn’t ready
To see you leave

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