that's whoa

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40° 51' 43.8444" N, 73° 53' 9.636" W

seeing a guy wearing all pink looking like a fruity pink panther
that's whoa
watching the mets lose every season
that's whoa
seeing a guy reciting corny lines by which he was dismiss by a female
that's whoa
failing classes in school
that's whoa
dropping out of school
that's whoa
guys getting arrested for hopping the turnstile
that's whoa
females arguing over a guy that is playing both of them
that's whoa
guys smoking weed trying to sound like ghetto philosophers
that's whoa
guys wearing tight clothes tighter than women
that's whoa
guys in which their pants is saggier than wet diapers
that's whoa
females with no class
that's whoa
people with no decency
that's whoa
see a woman run for the train with 4 inch heels and fall
that's whoa
people that have nothing to offer but excuses and pity
that's whoa
i'm from the bronx-my part of the city
now that's a whoa

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