Tears just mix with blood

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75078
United States
33° 14' 28.6116" N, 96° 48' 10.6164" W

I don't understand.
That's all I can say.
It's my life you have banned!
It's the same thing every single day...

The words and the looks,
They cause such pain and strife.
They're like things out of books...
But they cut like a knife.

I think of the mother too busy to care,
She looks but never sees...
That one thing that should deeply scare...
I just want you to help me please!

He tells me to BE PERFECT, but everyday I fail...
I know that he still loves me,
But it hammers in the nails.
He just does not see.

I feel that yearning in my soul,
To help me feel alive.
I take the blade and break my goal,
Hopefully I'll survive?

The power just brings the tears,
And they flow and mix with blood.
I call you even with the fear
You'll turn and run for good.

You always stay and help me,
Though inside I feel worthless.
You pick up the pieces you see,
And make me promise, I say yes.

Inside I'm still burning,
The pain will build and brew.
You understand the yearning,
But still say I love you.

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

this is a heartfelt poem

be the best at what you can be

be true to yourself

keep writing and build off your ideas

 

NirvanaQueen1991

Do you only speak in 

poem?

Or is the intent known

of your

quizzical

valued drone

an ever dulling lull...

the intriguing 

flowing pull

though it may seem slightly full

of modest

ego

Falter none

Thy bittersweet

small neighborhood

A slight vibrato

in the bitter, metallic stone walls

encasig the hell

of humanity's call.

Who's fault, who's fall?

GGicefire

  Where are the words coming from?

Look for the deepest place.

Maybe there is a central reason

But what are the imaginations that follow?

Is the topic truly your reason to write?

Or is it only that--

The topic?

Where do the words come from?

 

And,

Is the pain real?

Can it be found?

Is there a cause?

It seems, if I understand

That the centre of it can be isolated.

Then, it can be solved.

Tears and blood

As long as they're true

Don't flow forever.

You have every chance

Of survival.

Cling to your words

Always.

 

NirvanaQueen1991

Look on the bright side of suicide. lost eyesight im on your side. angel left wing right wing broken wing. lack of iron im not sleeping. protector of the kennel. ectoplasma exoskeletal. obituary birthday you scent is still, my place of reecovery... 

Sorry. Quoting Nirvana. 

Very decent poem.

Great ideas.

Execution is efficient.

Very sorry for you feelings.

But you can't write good poems such as this without feelings...

R4hul

This is one of the deepest poems 

the place where they come from for me on my poems is i open myself up to pain i have encountered and then the words start pouring out but so does pain and tears its not like what you think.../

im a 9th grader but have one good poem plse come and read adn it would mean the world 

Garrett Thomas

A fantastic work, and a true one, too. The world needs more people that think like you do. "You've got brains in your head, and you've got feet in your shoes, You can steer yourself any direction you choose," so with the blessing of Dr. Suess and myself, keep up the deep stuff. Thank you.

J. D. Wallace

This is a very emotional poem. Even someone like me, who hardly has any feelings, can understand the emotions from the heart put into this. Keep up the good work, and I look foward to reading more poems by you.

TamingOfSeaWolves

i hope one day i can write a poem with such meaning and heart in it. though it isn't as thick as a book and its not as big as the ocean it may come to mean just as much to someone out there. there is feeling, emotion,truth,patience i every word in this poem. well done

EJ Smith

I am both inspired and heartbroken by your honest, sincere outcry.

A beautiful poem from a beautiful heart.

Thank you so much for having the courage to write and share something so raw and real.

Keep on creating!

Jan Wienen

Thank you ...