Seeing You Now

Fri, 11/28/2014 - 00:06 -- Leyoht

I’m walking down the aisle

Through this big crowd.

I realize

I will be seeing you now.

It’s just the kind of feeling

I get with you.

Hopefully one day

I’ll finally see you, too.

 

It’s just a message:

A love-lust message.

 

The day will come

When I can see far and wide.

Hopefully that day comes

When I call you my bride.

It’s just the feeling

That I get when you’re down.

It comes and goes

But hey—I’m seeing you now.

 

It comes

Then goes

That’s just the way it flows.

With me,

With you.

You’ll one day see it, too.

 

Seeing you now fills me with glee

I feel free

Like a bee.

So much unlike a tree.

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