Rejection

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30120
United States
34° 9' 28.0116" N, 84° 52' 39.5004" W

One step too close
Face-to-face
Nothing else matters
But this moment today.

Now only centimeters apart
This crushing distance is closing
And with one final spin,
You decide to leave me abandoned.

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