A Real High School Story

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Being raised in a home , all alone but full of 5 .
I don't get much attention so sometimes I feel that I won't strive. No father in the home so I do acts so resentful , Mom is always working so I have no one to stress to ... I just want to be successful but people always want to bring me down I dont get why people find amusement in a simple frown . I feel down . Someone help me ? I had suicidal thoughts , life is crazy . Yet I'm here for a reason , I wonder when will it be my time of the season . Living in a world full of trillions , I don't know politics and I don't have a religion ... yet I trust in God yes he died for me so Everyday I wake up Ill be the best that I can be . I lived in shelters and different families homes but my mom kept us together so everything I get she'll get cause her I owe . At school I'm happy and never looking down but if you look closer of course you will find out . You will find out that in reality I don't got it like that , I get sad too but as my peers you'll never know that . i just want to be successful and I will not let no one bring me down . I'd continue this poem but I'll just lwt my actions speak for now

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