The other one

The other side

The one you thought was real

You thought it wouldn't hurt you

But that is not the case

 

The case is that it hurt you

it abused you throughout many years

and countless times it hurt others

And then moved to you

 

The first one left before you said "Hi"

It left you as the minimum

You were abandoned and lonely

But then the other one came

 

At first you were clueless

But then you realized

It was your weakness

And it ruined your life

 

And so you live your life

and it comes everyday

and ruins your happiness

So you live your life as "dead inside"

 

Because of the other one 

This poem is about: 
Me
My family
My country
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