Not My Head

he says, "you wouldn't want to be in my head..."
but its the joke that put people at easemostly because it's their humor that's a little out there then there's, "you would in mine. it would be an adventure"
and its true
a day, an hour... man, even a minute would be something worth seeing.worth being in.knowing him it would be an endless ride of nothing but Fun. but as for me, i stay quiet.
i don't think anyone would want to be in my head. not any rational people at least.
it gets really cluttered withNoise. about something... not sure what it is... it all comes so fastand they all just talk over each other
that i can't comprehend what the point of it all is.but i know its not good. its far from good.
its...sad.very...sad.and i don't know why.

 

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