No One

No one can see
The pain in my eyes
No one can see
When I cry
No one can see
That i'm dying inside
Thise comments you make
Hurt like hell
Those comments you made
Left marks on my skin
Those comments you made
Are now said and dond
You can't take back what's been heard
So why make those comments?
Those comments
Should be left in your head
Save a person
from having suicidal thoughts
Save a person
from the words that have be spoken
Cause at the end of the day
No one can see
The pain on my eyes
And no one can see
When i cry
They damn sure
can't see that i am dying inside!

Comments

kmf24

Stay strong, you are so beyond talented! love the poem (:

Poeticlane

Thank you soo much! I hope you enjoy my other poems as well!:)

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