" Motherland is Superiors to Heaven"

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In the lap of Himalayan it lies

still I remmember when I close my eyes 

because of the melodious voice of reven 

My motherland is superior to heaven 

 

Beautiful Home under Asia 

creates the native sickness and touches my heart 

my country is known as thunder and dragon

Mother and Motherland is superior to heaven

 

Dancing river in box of my memory 

cypress is still waiting for me 

Always, I remember the image of takin*

My mother and motherland is superior to heaven

     * Takin: National animal of Bhutan

      Name: Lila Chamlagai

      School: Springfield Central High School, Springfield Massachusetts 

       Class of 2015.

 

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