Let me know

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13620
United States
43° 54' 25.65" N, 75° 26' 46.0536" W

Let me know if you are different
Let me know if you’re not like the rest
Let me know if you’re willing to give effort
Let me know if you’re just messing with my head
Let me know if you like me for me
Let me know if this is a dream or reality
Let me know if this is the end or if we are just meant to be friends
Let me know if this is a new beginning meant to be
Let me know if this is what it will come down to
Let me know if this is the way you are
Let me know if you are you and willing to be kind
Let me know if you are what I am meaning to find
Let me know if this is going to be worth it
Let me know if this how you are going to be
Let me know if you are the right one for me

Comments

jwiener

I love this poem, because it definitely speaks to all the different questions that people have when they fall in love. The repetition of "let me know" added to the uncertainty and hesitation and definitely made the poem flow. If you are interested in other types of poems that use repetition, check out how to write a haiku and lots of other types of poems in the "poetry writing tips" section under "resources!"

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