It's not making senseNo one

Tue, 06/24/2014 - 08:13 -- aarella

It's not making sense

No one hears the voice beside her, whispering in her ear

Lurking around every corner

Waiting to push her down

She claims she's stronger, that she'll pull through

No sign that she'll make it

Their goodbye has come.

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Nothing lasts forever

Slowly but surely it all goes away

Promises don't mean a thing, becuase forever doesn't last

You can't hold on forever

Nothing lasts.

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