Immortality

Immortality could be a curse and a living joke You couldn’t believe in the tales told by the old folks Since I was a kid, I dream about living an Immortal life Not just any immortal life, but a life to still see my wife 20 years from the other side I can’t no longer contained the pain that the venomous snake caused to my vain But the change caused my soul not to reacted the same It's a shame, that Immortality is to be blame for all the living sin

 

 

 

 

 

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