I made it

Mon, 07/15/2013 - 16:59 -- Bmj10

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It starts of as a dream but to everyone your just making a scene. 

You see the bright lights in the big city, even though your at the park in the dark. 

The first time you step on the field your just another kid. 

Then your an allstar shooting for the stars. 

You watch majorleaguers do it Like it's easy.

Lifes far from easy.

Its hazy.

Growing up you see things you can't explain.

But you'll do what ever it takes to play the game.

You sacrifice you body, you piece of mind, your tears, your fears, sometimes even peers.

All to look at and reach for that goal!

in any split second you could be in the hole.

Doubters try and knock you down, while you make the believers proud.

One day, one time, one chance, one dream, one goal!

I made it! 

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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