the first line of this poem really caught my eye. i like how deliberate and careful "made piece by piece" sounded and it really worked towards your theme about uniqueness and love. but i wish your poem was longer and there was some more details on why you love that person so it could be more personal. i am also a little disappointed that your poem ended with the cliche line of "i love you cause your not like the others"...there are also 2 grammar mistakes that could've been easily fixed like puerto rican and you're.